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AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

I'm probably absolutely crazy

You could say that I have fits

‘cause there’s nothing I like better

Than seeing a lovely pair of tits

Ok, let me give you a friendly suggestion, and yes, I love tits. Being a tit lover does not make you a good poet.

Try this alteration:

I'm absolutely crazy

You could say that I have fits

There’s nothing I like better

Then a pair of lovely tits

Is that an improvement? Carry on Prof!

doctorwesdoctorwesover 1 year agoAuthor

This is what happens when engineers attempt poetry. There is a reason we're engineers.

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