by doctorwes
I'm probably absolutely crazy
You could say that I have fits
‘cause there’s nothing I like better
Than seeing a lovely pair of tits
Ok, let me give you a friendly suggestion, and yes, I love tits. Being a tit lover does not make you a good poet.
Try this alteration:
I'm absolutely crazy
You could say that I have fits
There’s nothing I like better
Then a pair of lovely tits
Is that an improvement? Carry on Prof!
This is what happens when engineers attempt poetry. There is a reason we're engineers.