All Comments on 'grrls, grrls, grrls'

Ahh ~ she's back again for another day's fun;

and is she ever having fun here - enjoy!!

awesome, fast moving, full of alliteration and smooth flowing description. As Rybka said and I agree, the parenthesis do slow down or distract from the pace and images and are not really needed to make the poem stronger.

Where's the H? There should be an H. There will be - soon. This is the first poem of yours I've read. I'm going to look for more.

Tess