All Comments on 'Gun Show, Last Night in Atlantic City'

by greenmountaineer

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todski28todski28almost 10 years ago
i wish i could critique

But fucking brilliant is all I got, you rock Mr gm!

UnderYourSpellUnderYourSpellalmost 10 years ago
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Your poems are always a good read, I've yet to see a dud! A very imaginative piece.

tazz317tazz317almost 10 years ago
ENTENDRES ALWAYS MAKES GOOD READING

with doubles let your conscience dictate, TK U MLJ LV NV

TsothaTsothaalmost 10 years ago

And "last night" is back in the title. :D Wonderful double meaning, and the edit really brought life to the thug.

twelveoonetwelveoonealmost 10 years ago
fuckin 1201

don't call me johnny. yeh. what tod said,

this is a nice break for you.

5ed

MyaFeelsMyaFeelsover 3 years ago

So good! I was almost moving like I could hear a beat.

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