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by Kaishaku

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twelveoonetwelveooneabout 19 years ago
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nicely done, like the formating

Wanton VixxxenWanton Vixxxenabout 19 years ago
From the foods for the belly...

you bring us now to the appetite of forbidden love. In those few words you took Me to the hunger of his erotic yearnings - her. Another of your delightful cuisines to be devoured by the images you penned here today. A sizzling, spicy hot write, K!

Now I'm starving. <wink>

Voracious Vixxx

AnonymousAnonymousabout 19 years ago
*****

mentioned in May 3rd reviews.

Tess

annaswirlsannaswirlsalmost 19 years ago
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raised 2 levels with the last line. very nice

AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 years ago
Another 5 star poem!

Love the line breaks!

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