by painedlove
I love this, the story, the passion, the inevitable hot lust, the reflections...I can not quote any specifics that I favour, because for me, it is filled with those special hooks...Excellent! 5ed and <3ed.
Cannot improve or expand on the comments of the super Honey. I'll just endorse the admirable praise.
Quibble: not keen on IM or Il used here and in other of your verses.