All Comments on 'Handcuffed'

......little ode to lost love. A little prosey in the beginning but I'll be looking for more poems from Lilacs. Good first submission. Keep writing, please.

Tess

little acrostic. I saw it on the passion thread. glad you posted it here. good work.

Five.

The second half is excellent because you focussed on concrete detail. In poetry you arrive at feelings through the presentation of things. You'd have been better presenting you physical reaction to the break up than to say your heartbroke. You have some ability. Keep working at it.