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by Maydaypilot

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DevilbobyDevilbobyover 2 years ago

Not a great lover of poetry but I can see the point in your poem but don't feel qualified to judge, my shortcomings not yours.

Winter_FareWinter_Fareover 2 years ago

That's a beautiful idea, inspiring!

29wordsforsnow29wordsforsnowover 2 years ago

We were given some mighty tools that can pick, pinch, stroke, hold, rub...and write!

raven_rose_auraven_rose_auover 2 years ago

Oh you absolutely should put this in audio ~ one of my favourites!! Such busy hands *smiles*

PiscatorPiscatorover 2 years ago

Powerful & Erotic you've handled it well

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

good!...

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

WOW.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Congratulations Mayday!

Pippa76Pippa76over 1 year ago

Beautiful, well written, fills my mind with erotic imagery. Well done.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Congratulations! Love it.

BlissMaraBlissMaraover 1 year ago

Powerful....and gentle. Sensuous, and sexy strength. Encourages the reader to close their eyes and imagine....and feel. Very apt imagery--thank you for sharing your poetic gift.

elizalooelizalooover 1 year ago

Congratulations! Your work is always perfection.

SmuttyandfunSmuttyandfunabout 1 year ago

So beautifully crafted and so incredibly sensual. Absolute perfection!

melimelissamelimelissaabout 2 months ago

love your hands already

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Older male. Natural beauty addict. I love. I feel the hard and soft, in most things. I know real and grace, and embrace them. I need to write, and strive to write well, to reach my reader. Flawed, flying blind, but still flying. I value feedback from ratings, public a...

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