All Comments on 'Happy Birthday, Pastor Bae Hyung Ky'

by foehn2

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My Erotic TrailMy Erotic Trailover 16 years ago
bows humble...

an obvious sign that the war on terrorism still rages on, yet so many scream bring our soldiers home, when the war is not yet over and may never be! Touching and thought provoking poetry (~_~) thanks for the read!

foehn2foehn2over 16 years agoAuthor
Long title.

Unfortunately, Literotica truncates titles that contain more than 36 characters (counting spaces and punctuation). The correct title is missing the last letter, and should read: <b>"Happy Birthday, Pastor Bae Hyung Kyu"</b> -- I guess I could have shortened the title, but didn't feel like it. -- <i>foehn2</i>

twelveoonetwelveooneover 16 years ago
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hostages as candles, chilling. Excellent, daring poetry, foehn.And this is brutal and telling: but killing any others would/

hurt our cause. We can't find another one./

On a completely non-poetical note:

Kind of makes me want to shoot a few Sikhs, 'cause what the hell I'm from Texas and I'm ignorant.

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