All Comments on 'happy hollowness'

Hi dmb.

The first stanza, that repetition of line ends works. Usually makes me cringe, this works. cheers. Look forward to more of your work... I think there are two

right

there...

me and my musical companions were singing on last halloween and somewhere along the line, happy hallowness came out! if we're gonna be empty inside, mught as well enjoy it.

your comments mean the world to me, thanks!

Your Poem was Mentioned on the thread

"New Poems Review"

wow!!

That was really good!! Deep.

Well Done ;-)