All Comments on 'harpoon- dropping the anchor'

This is better than good. I want to take this poem out on a date and get to know it better! Original, well written, just fabulous. I just read Ange's caramel suite and I was feeling totally envious and now I read this. I just can't stand it! I'm going to write something incredible right now!

...in your poem that seems determined to exist and how your spirit spills out and escapes. Excellent.

for a wonderful poem...

jim : )

Did you swallow a Hale pill?

A very good poem.

A fun read.

This poem was selected from Lit's archive of over 40,000 poems for inclusion in today's Archival Review.<br>

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