by RhymeFairy
and elsewhere the word placement/line wrapping is exceptional! Odd, we both have new poems today! This one is a winner!
your poem touched me deeply (~_~) the lone dove calls in dusks dimming light, remembering love.
What a poignant piece. It is riveting and dynamic. It flowed so gently and effortlessly and really evoked emotion. Excellent! Really the best you've ever written.
'while fishing in deep water
ponds with bait as big
as his prick. '
as is the rest of the poem. A poignant and utterly beautiful write.
Great stuff, RF