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All Comments on 'He ... Touched Me'

by RhymeFairy

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 18 years ago
This is fab

'while fishing in deep water

ponds with bait as big

as his prick. '

as is the rest of the poem. A poignant and utterly beautiful write.

Great stuff, RF

bigntenderbigntenderalmost 18 years ago
It touched me

What a poignant piece. It is riveting and dynamic. It flowed so gently and effortlessly and really evoked emotion. Excellent! Really the best you've ever written.

My Erotic TrailMy Erotic Trailalmost 18 years ago
touched me

your poem touched me deeply (~_~) the lone dove calls in dusks dimming light, remembering love.

LeBrozLeBrozalmost 18 years ago
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This poem was mentioned in Wednesday's New Poems Reviews.

sacksackalmost 18 years ago
I love the "tested the snow" line.....

and elsewhere the word placement/line wrapping is exceptional! Odd, we both have new poems today! This one is a winner!

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