All Comments on 'Head and Shoulders Knees and Toes'

without stuck tongue is a really good word pairing, the three T's make the words trip over each other just enough to give a sense of it.

as to the biting...........

let all lusty young lovers just drink, Not Sip. tk u mlj lv nv

I enjoy you lack of punctuation, it forces multiple readings and you give so much to your writing that even when it's incomprehensible it's enjoyable to read again and again.

Thanks for all the feedback.