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I love the "ishy" seasons, here. Nicely blurs the edges of language, too.

enter through these open doors

into these oft closed minds,

it is okay

your potato soup is waiting-

I hope you have been well

this took me to a train window into what might be day break or twilight no one can tell through the fog and motion, what season is coming who is going-- I love when poetry takes me like this, fade to black thank you sj