All Comments on 'Heaven's Half Note'

I Love your play on and with words.

Just very fresh and light. I think

you could have trimmed this down

a bit, but it still works.

Very telling of play and love ~

More Please ~

I felt every word... thank you!

Ohhh the erotic scent of your lover..is carried with you threw all of eternity..well done my friend well done

I can see the work that went into this, and it is very good. It could shine with a little tightening and rewording, but maybe not. A very nice read.

Tattler

bearlee

Thanks For sharing a little bit of you. I hope to see more