All Comments on 'Held in Rhyme'

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Syndra LynnSyndra Lynnover 16 years ago
Hot..

ok, this little bit of lust made me wet.

thanks!

KundalinguiniKundalinguiniover 16 years ago
Well, Syndra...

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...that's because you're a slut. ;)<p>

Steamy, sbg. Some of the bad-porn clichés made me cringe, but at least they served the meter and rhyme well... and the heat is undeniable.

Syndra LynnSyndra Lynnover 16 years ago
and...

Kundalinguini your point is???? Still very hot. ty :)

Syn

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