All Comments on 'Hell'

You definitely need to proofread your work. This poem is riddled with errors,

which should have been caught.

No one there to more or gloat - "more" = "mourn"?

20 years later no one remembers me death - "me" = "my"

Loves lost,Hearts found - "lost,hearts" - space needed

There is no savior hes already dead - "hes" = "he's"

Its time for the world to lose it's head - "Its" = "It's"