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what's more to say? few words spoke volumes! nice flow, lovely sentiment.

Love this:

carry

a sword

and a lantern

to see which one

I'll have to use

Still a groupie ;)

or some super fucking sexy promise? this is absolutely wonderful Liar, enjoyed every word, and the alliteraion is great, loved the first part especially! :)

...stuff. Demanded more than one reading!

I had no clue as to what it was going to be about. Really well done, Liar.

I can't get this one off my mind! Good thing it is such a great poem. Thanks, liar!