by sophia jane
that feeling...that need to know, that pain in the pit of your stomach!
{{hugs}}
~Honey
Hurt seems to make poems better automatically. And not a wasted word -- nicely done, SJ
Very good poem SJ, looking forward to all seeing more of your new works up.
your poems, SJ. These are the questions I want to ask and never can, never would get an answer if I did - I can totally identify, although my bitterness is less eloquent than yours. Terrific work! LJ
...this did not resonate with me the way it does right now...
"I wonder
if you think of me,
remember me,"
I just simply don't have the words to say how much this poem strikes me. It is wonderful. There really are too many emotions going through me now to comment furter. I think that's the purest type of poetry, one that can move another so profoundly.
Damn if I know, but I do know that we just can't stop ourselves at times. A very evocative write of those times.
TY,BD