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by sophia jane

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logophilelogophileabout 19 years ago
Anguish and indecision

are both clearly felt here. Nice work!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 19 years ago
I know

that feeling...that need to know, that pain in the pit of your stomach!

{{hugs}}

~Honey

Softouch911Softouch911about 19 years ago
Ouch

Hurt seems to make poems better automatically. And not a wasted word -- nicely done, SJ

tolyktolykabout 19 years ago
You know I love it

Very good poem SJ, looking forward to all seeing more of your new works up.

Bridget69Bridget69about 19 years ago
Very true.

It's never easy to lose one to another.

~photoguy~~photoguy~about 19 years ago
excellent work

very moving

((huggs))

AnonymousAnonymousabout 19 years ago
I really love

your poems, SJ. These are the questions I want to ask and never can, never would get an answer if I did - I can totally identify, although my bitterness is less eloquent than yours. Terrific work! LJ

BelegonBelegonalmost 19 years ago
I so very wish...

...this did not resonate with me the way it does right now...

"I wonder

if you think of me,

remember me,"

rikaaimrikaaimalmost 19 years ago
Wow

I just simply don't have the words to say how much this poem strikes me. It is wonderful. There really are too many emotions going through me now to comment furter. I think that's the purest type of poetry, one that can move another so profoundly.

Bill DadaBill Dadaover 18 years ago
Why do we do that to ourselves?

Damn if I know, but I do know that we just can't stop ourselves at times. A very evocative write of those times.

TY,BD

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