by raindancer
This poem comes across as the theme it builds on: clean and clear and effective. I can almost catch the image and it seems beautiful...
This proves my long-standing opinion that "poets" are actually failed writers who can't focus well enough to produce a real story. What a pity.
I might have more sympathy for the last comment if it was not anonymous. There is a world of difference between an image poetically realised and a 'story'. I love this poem and wish that I had written it.
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Don't pay any mind to the anonymous comment it's obviously someone who has to write reams to get their point across whereas you can weave magic in just a few lines