All Comments on 'Her First Time'

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WindChymeWindChymeabout 20 years ago
Naughty

I liked it...but the 75% means you could tighten it up and really leave readers ticked off and chuckling at the same time. You're just not finished yet.

Bad!!! ;-)

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 17 years ago
made me laugh

I smiled and laughed. thanks.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago
Too Funny!

I was reading along and then.....What? The oven door? Are they in the kitchen?

Too Fuckin' Funny!!! Laughed my as off!! Great Job!

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