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by Maydaypilot

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

This is so well done. Gifted writer!

swiftlytiltingswiftlytiltingalmost 3 years ago

You use such lovely imagery in your decription of the beauty and preciousness of cum.

Disgusting?! Wiping your mouth as if you puked? . . . No, never! I had an almost visceral reaction to that verse.

I've read your poem several times now. It's an evocative commentary that's composed with care and gets better upon each reading. Well done.

Woodthrush55108Woodthrush55108almost 3 years ago

Nobody writes like you. Beautiful.

Paul4playPaul4playalmost 3 years ago

Excellent imagery that evokes sensual and visceral reactions....

...you beautifully capture the simplicity and complexity of His Cum!

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Older male. Natural beauty addict. I love. I feel the hard and soft, in most things. I know real and grace, and embrace them. I need to write, and strive to write well, to reach my reader. Flawed, flying blind, but still flying. I value feedback from ratings, public a...

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