All Comments on 'Hobbies'

meter and rhyme here. A comment on our disposable society? Or too much disposable time?

I write a few words

that few ever read

and if I'm lucky

a few go to seed

Nice words, Word!

I get this feeling that there is something desperate going on behind these words, but I just don't know what. But I like that mystery, a little bit... :)

that I like, I'd have to repost the whole thing in quotes. Great images distilled down to sparkle...well done!

~Merry

on your own terms.

above attatchment...perhaps

I love the bricks and windows

hehe

Thank you

A cute and pleasant read

Each hobby different and

tied up in one stanza

with a tag rhyme twist.

The rhythm works well

and the last stanza describes

the poet's role in society

(and that of the critic).

Please write more poems like this.