by Kaishaku
Wow, you know how to write! I am continually impressed with your stuff. Five and a recommend...you are also the only other person here who writes tanka...
he is an expert in haiku. How many alts doth thou have? Maybe 4 or 5 or more? and they are all excellent poets/ storytellers in their own right.
a 5 without much to say, I do like negotiable, negligent, glimpse, fiscal fervor, etc. "tumescent flesh" ahh, but as weak point, not bad.
and an excellent example of no wasted words: you made every one work. Always a pleasure to read your poems!