All Comments on 'Hold Me Close'

I especially liked the first little bit, and the last third of the poem.

I hope to see more from you.

I like it alot, its sexy, sensual and very enjoyable

Your poem was so warm and so descriptive of the act of sex, yet it wasn't pornographic (whatever that means), but shows how the act of fucking between lovers can be a beautiful thing. Thak you.

Hmmm, very nice. It captures your feelings, not just the action. I like it!

You deserve a multitude of top votes. Very well written poetry. Keep it up. We all want more.