by sxcascinn
You deserve a multitude of top votes. Very well written poetry. Keep it up. We all want more.
Hmmm, very nice. It captures your feelings, not just the action. I like it!
Your poem was so warm and so descriptive of the act of sex, yet it wasn't pornographic (whatever that means), but shows how the act of fucking between lovers can be a beautiful thing. Thak you.
I especially liked the first little bit, and the last third of the poem.
I hope to see more from you.