All Comments on 'Hot Incandescent Spheres Of Gas'

by dorksicle

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Jennifer CJennifer Calmost 19 years ago
Lovely writing

I love the grace in this,

so simple and pure.

Really nice piece,

Thanks.

~ Jenn

sacksackalmost 19 years ago
a good example of "less is more".

Which is already starting to become a definite hallmark of your style!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 19 years ago
Perfection...

of a soulful moment. You stopped time here and allowed us the peace and emotions of a split second of living...

thank you

du~

dcpoet44dcpoet44almost 19 years ago
nicely done......

and that screen door hinges squeak is killer. small it is but very effective........don

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 19 years ago
I love this....

...word snapshot catching a tiny moment in time perfectly.

Tess

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