All Comments on 'Hot Incandescent Spheres Of Gas'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 19 years ago
I love this....

...word snapshot catching a tiny moment in time perfectly.

Tess

dcpoet44dcpoet44almost 19 years ago
nicely done......

and that screen door hinges squeak is killer. small it is but very effective........don

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 19 years ago
Perfection...

of a soulful moment. You stopped time here and allowed us the peace and emotions of a split second of living...

thank you

du~

sacksackalmost 19 years ago
a good example of "less is more".

Which is already starting to become a definite hallmark of your style!

Jennifer CJennifer Calmost 19 years ago
Lovely writing

I love the grace in this,

so simple and pure.

Really nice piece,

Thanks.

~ Jenn

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