All Comments on 'Hot Lovin'

I wish it were me you were writing about.Simply loved it, as you said I would.

Well it sure is hot, I usually wouldn't like peoples gettin thrown against walls and buttons getting spit across the room but you kinda make it sound fun, he, he. Seriously it was steaming hot.

wow your poems are getting hotter and better with each One you enter. jeff smiles at you ....

Oh, Yeah! Now that's what I'm talkin' about!! Really good poem...now you have me wanting to write a hot little poem myself....

Geee...wonder what you were thinking about when you wrote this...mmmmm mmmmm good. <grin>...you sure know how to heat up a page...

lil this was one hell of a ride i need a cold shower so i can read it again sweets i would loved to be on the recieving end of the passion that wrote this for sure!! definietly a lucky man

LilDarlin, You really know how to make me Blush. You don't know the pictures that ran thru my virgin mind as I read this one. I'm not old enough for hot flashes but I sure was hot after reading it. Don't cool them down just for me.

lil, you do have a way with words...I liked this one, but, especially liked the masterbating one in the tub.....that is a fantasy of mine....watching a woman take pleasure in herself....its so.erotic,,,thanks again,,,,take care,,,,and talk soon, Aroused....aka, david

Fiery, explosive,

lusting out of control;

anyone got a spare towel?