All Comments on 'How Do You Know?'

by BluOrchd

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CallieGreyCallieGreyover 4 years ago
Good question

But is the questioning part of the game?

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
bad choice

try a gun, I mean again

BluOrchdBluOrchdover 4 years agoAuthor
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CallieGrey- I'm not sure it's supposed to be, just some things I'm trying to deal with.

Anonymous user- Thanks so much for that ever so helpful advice, I'll get right on that.

Hardrider56Hardrider56over 4 years ago
Keep it real people

BluOrchd I can't answer your questions but that is life, ask yourself deep down inside is that what you want?

Anonymous please take your own advice and rid the world of an asshole.

Tom

AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago
Anonymous comments

Why do people not understand that there are so many reasons why we write, why we try and put stuff down on ‘paper.’

If it helps, great! But negative or aggressive comments help no one, and to hide behind anonymity is well.......draw your own conclusions.

stickygirlstickygirlover 3 years ago
Let me know

Let me know if you figure it out. Too difficult to figure out someone else's heart when you can't understand you own x

LazorritaLazorritaover 3 years ago

This is exactly how I feel. Yet I plunge into things, because I so easily consent, and because it turns me on so powerfully. I love seeing your honesty in the games of love and sex. I relate fully!

AFoolRushesInAFoolRushesInalmost 3 years ago

I like the poem, and the courage (and honesty) it took to publish it.

Perhaps another way is not to be mastered, but an equal partner in a relationship. I have always found that to be more open and trusting from both people involved.

No judgement; just how I feel.

BluOrchdBluOrchd12 months agoAuthor

In the end, I didn't trust the person I wrote this poem about. I didn't really even know him to begin with, he started

messaging me when my ex left. First, to check on me and my kids, which I thought was nice. Later is when he started with the other stuff. The fact that I didn't know him made my choice easy.

Thank you for all of your comments. I wasn't sure of a lot of things when I wrote this but it was about a specific person and a situation he wanted me to help him create and I was in no way ready for that.

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