by DeepGreenEyes
Hmm... very cool.
Interesting concept that (from my perspective; it’s a lot more dynamic than it is obvious) cleverly touches upon the mystical/time-bending aspect of sex in a manner you just don’t see. More importantly, the rhythm of the words laid beautifully, mate.
Good stuff!
This is brilliant to the point of being refreshing (or is it the other way round?).
I loved this poem so much. It is a clever idea well executed. I want more!!!