All Comments on 'Hungry For A Fix'

we've still got poetry.

This isn't bad, considering you decided to eschew form and just leave your poem strewn across the space.

I was enjoying the near rhymes in the first quatrain but then you sank into a bit of passive voice to force a perfect rhyme scheme towards the middle of your verse.

Line breaks would have made the transition to traditional end rhyming couplets and phrases a little easier to accept, I think.