All Comments on 'I am War'

Damn good poetry and excellent theme with great deliverence of word play, I very much like this poem thank you.

is to handle even the tough subjects. Thankyou.

I think you could have been more effective using a different technique or two, but you have a strong poem ...

in spite of anything not to my own personal tastes. If you'd like to see my suggestions, feel free to contact me.