I cannot deny

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An erotic-horror mind-control villanelle.
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AlinaX
AlinaX
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his whispering, words; I cannot deny
my loathing of his voice, of his too persistent
fingers, drumming, dum-ditty-dum

strip, he says, and - scowling - I ask why
I should tolerate his sick, perverted lust
his whispering, words; I cannot deny

the way my exposed flesh seems to hum
with anticipation of unsought pleasure
fingers, drumming, dum-ditty-dum

stop, I say, but his kisses make me sigh
my breasts are in my hands, my breath echoes
his whispering, words; I cannot deny

the delicious heat provoked, his questing thumb
possessive, between, within, against my clit
fingers, drumming, dum-ditty-dum

I hate you, I cry, lost in invitation
no matter how I fight, my thoughts become
his whispering, words; I cannot deny
fingers, drumming, dum-ditty-dum

AlinaX
AlinaX
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AlinaXAlinaX9 months agoAuthor

The villanelle structure amplifies the rhythm in a very sinister way.

Thanks for the comments! :-)

MargotPaygeMargotPayge9 months ago

I love villanelles and this one really works well.

29wordsforsnow29wordsforsnowover 1 year ago

Hypnotic words of a bitter pleasure.

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