All Comments on 'I Dreamed You Came to My Bed'

the tune of the Everly brothers?

A dream worth re-dreaming. ~Imp

many have had similiar dreams, but your description was unique, the last stanza was beautiful!

just a thought, maybe consider leaving out the part that it was a dream, it would make it even more mysterious and etheral

More so on the romantic side. I really enjoyed your poem. I wouldn't want to wake from that dream :)

Your choice of words were superb!

has been mentioned in todays reviews

your wit shines in this literary Art

I would have never guessed where this word

trail spiraled down to , haven't met <grin>

cute and very clever

One question, how do you get such

clarity in your dreams <hahaha>

excellent poetry~

thanks for this

You might want to tighten up the first paragraph, to avoid longer sentences spilling over lines. Otherwise pretty amazing, just got better and better!

that I didn't see this poem, yesterday. It's simple and beautiful.