by foehn
You might want to tighten up the first paragraph, to avoid longer sentences spilling over lines. Otherwise pretty amazing, just got better and better!
your wit shines in this literary Art
I would have never guessed where this word
trail spiraled down to , haven't met <grin>
cute and very clever
One question, how do you get such
clarity in your dreams <hahaha>
excellent poetry~
More so on the romantic side. I really enjoyed your poem. I wouldn't want to wake from that dream :)
Your choice of words were superb!
many have had similiar dreams, but your description was unique, the last stanza was beautiful!
just a thought, maybe consider leaving out the part that it was a dream, it would make it even more mysterious and etheral