All Comments on 'i fucking hate bowling'

Actually it's the virtuosity that really gets me going with this poem / the belly laughs in the slaughter house / I'm not even going to begin to analyze the dynamics of what makes this such a delightful piece, Daphne.

Change that "doesn't" (which goes with "things," right?) to a "don't" for s/v agreement. This is just wonderful, DA. Also a great choice for publication. :-)

she'd never get this if I sent it to her.

Which is one reason I loved it so much.

Your work always makes me want to write, to try new things, which is why it's so important.

Thank you for sharing

all in all there is good, and there is better, so if I say/ human sexuality is a belly laugh

in a slaughter house./ and /i stole your book from a girl (friend) /because three abed is too many

holes and parts and that scenario wears a

t-shirt that reads, "logistical nightmare." / are great, it shouldn't be construed that the rest of isn't good. Even the lines that I do not like (in themselves) fit well and they play well against other lines.

Yes I must leave a comment. I was with you all the way in this poem, and not all the Daphnes (Daphnes:) in the piece could put me off. Thanks for sharing this moment of madness. Congratulations on the 'Green E' - it is well deserved.

does the thermometer not go to 212?

Congrats on the little "greenie" for this really unique and creative piece. Daphne ought to love it!

Wow - really gripping. You had me the whole time.