All Comments on 'I Hate the Dark'

by JayJams78

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Winter_FareWinter_Fareover 2 years ago

"And lately we've all been scribbling blind,

pretending we're drawing clear lines

in sand we can't see.

Truth: we're erasing sanity in maddest rush

to sanitize shadows."

Somewhat true

You inspire me to add my fireside view

I have to say I've found

It's never as simple for me

Old lines won't fade in peace

History is a world wide mandala of seven billion truths and their orphaned children

The future will be bright as a thousand suns

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Beautiful! I loved it.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Damn. Powerful, gorgeous...

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This is goodbye, all. Thanks for the good times. As for the bad, well, I leave that to you. I'm on to better things now, never to return. I leave the posted works as a gift to you. Maybe one day when you hear them in performance art or see them on a page, you will know who Jay...