All Comments on 'I Tried Hard'

and honest.

The little things that define, to everyone else, who we are.

thank you

but it read more like a succession of things you did than a poem. I think you could involve the reader deeping into these emotions if you expressed them though images instead of just listing activities.

jim : )

Full of emotion. I can totally relate. Thanks for this one!

I like the flow of this, the almost "listing", it gives the feeling of frenetic activity to block out having to think(been there myself)...nicely done.

~Merry