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Welcome to Lit

With this creative first prose poem piece;

Shows some promise, let's see what else you've got.

A woman with a simple request ~ tame me and I'll follow you anywhere.

ms rain you are a breath of fresh air. I loved it. please submit more.

*fans self*....blushes (that was incredible)

im sooooooooo proud of you rainy sis ,,, i told ya this is a winner :)

Interesting pacing, a nice sequencing of images, too. Good start!

Bitch in Leather & Silk