All Comments on 'I Will Be The Bee'

I've been enjoying your recent venture into poetry Simon. This one is really nice, an interesting message that could, in the big picture of the Universe, be applied to mankind.

"Empires of bees and flowers" seems a more interesting image to build around, even with the same theme. I appreciate poetry. Please continue to share.

But desire remains. Well done. I love the imagery and metaphore. A life and timeless love captured in but a few short days. Both arousing and touching at the same time. Bravo!