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cruelpoetcruelpoetalmost 6 years agoAuthor
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It is a meta-poem. To explain it (and thereby spoil the poem), the poet, searching for a third line to complete his poem, finds his lovers' breast and her cries of pain complete the poem.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago
3rd line

which is?

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