All Comments on 'If I gave you a taste'

by RhymeFairy

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Unbridled_PassionUnbridled_Passionalmost 17 years ago
beautiful

so much feeling in this one~great poem RF

LeBrozLeBrozalmost 17 years ago
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This poem was mentioned in Wednesday's New Poems Reviews.

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Many FeathersMany Feathersalmost 17 years ago
Of course

You know I love your writing. We think (and feel) so much alike.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 17 years ago
Beautiful

and quite touching

I loved the feeling underneath its words and the last stanza grabbed me with its wonderfully done symbolism

'You

will replace the pieces, fix my puzzle

and apply even strokes of honey

to glue me back together

again.'

Excellent stuff

TeeTeeTeeTeealmost 17 years ago
Splendid

Another great one RF, I do so enjoy reading your work. Thanks for sharing :)

T_T

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