by Brittni4u
This hits hard and I can relate. The timing of seeing this couldn't have been better. Eloquent in your humility and pain, hoping upon hope.
Wow. Your heart bleeds forgiveness. Like your stories, you dive in with all your being and that is what makes you great.
WOW !!! What a deep poem. A truly honest & open expression of feelings about a lover who you hugely miss for qualities you came to realize after your relationship that became a former relationship after one of you left or because he or she died. Sadly but better late than never, you now appreciate what you didn't appreciate about him or her when you were together. Honorably, you have the humility and courage to express how sorry you are in the form of this poem. Not sure if I'm interpreting everything right, but am going to read this a few more times to figure it out more. Brilliantly written, Brittni. Gave it 5 stars on here. But to me it's a hundred stars!!!. ... Tommy
It teared me up. I am so very very lucky to have found true love recently and so I know of the heartbreak you feel without it close to you. I think you need to go fight for it... not ever give up. Very touching poem Brittni and as you see from the other comments, we all feel the same way. Thank you for sharing.