All Comments on 'Immortally Yours'

Wonderful images.. and alluring words..

quote;

As children of this October’s reign

in birth both tricks and treats will gift

to her the treats so long awaited

to me the tricks of love ill fated

Costumed all as Destiny

A wonderful metaphor here.. I felt the pain and the love that is immortal..

du~

Mentioned in the Sunday reviews..

Beautifully conveys how one lives on in others' memories.

touches deep. Haunting and lovely, Vixxx!

is expressed in this poem so beautifully. Thank you for the glimpse into your heart's soul.

Is this a particular form? I found myself reading it over and over, playing with the rhyme and rhythm-- very fun!

It deserves a stronger ending, though!

flyguy

with a tantalizing tail

As I read more and more of your writing, I become a bigger and bigger fan. What I find especially interesting, is how your words make me feel different emotions... to me, that is the mark of a great writer.

Weaving images

direct

from mind

to mind