All Comments on 'In Elation'

What a beautiful love poem that is written so fluently. It has a rhythmic musical feel. I would say something other than "filled mind"--maybe "full" or "cluttered," but that's really just a quibble. :)

the only real reason I had "filled" was to make use of an allusion to a song. This one probably turned out well because I wrote it while still "high" on that feeling! I didn't want to pound my head on the table, so I stuck with the first word to express that the emptiness is gone. :)

this... I feel it often. Well done. I enjoyed this piece :)

Gentle and loving tribute.