All Comments on 'In Our Dream'

you laid this on the page. I thought it was a little

wordy and had a few too many cliches. Sometimes

I like a cliche for the visual. The visual

was clear and I enjoyed the read. sandspike

I like your imagery. Just it has been done before.

I do that a lot too. It is hard to get around,

when it is Reallllly what you want to say, eh ~

I love the flow, and the write itself, is very sweet.

Please give us More !!!

*Smiles*

Love your vision

of love lived together;

such a good start ~

but the true challenge ~

how many variations

can you build on this theme?

Beautiful imagry.