by The_Fool
sin and priest contrast highlights the verse, and one can understand the feeling. Hopefully most have felt the same intensity.
and this poem confirms it in a lovely sexy way. I do wonder about the narrator in this poem though because it's about you and her but seems to be addressed to someone else (the reader I know). I think it would be stronger overall if you kept it between "I" and "you." That would make it feel more intimate which I think you want with this kind of poem. But....just my opinion, dahling. xxoo