All Comments on 'indulgence'

and this poem confirms it in a lovely sexy way. I do wonder about the narrator in this poem though because it's about you and her but seems to be addressed to someone else (the reader I know). I think it would be stronger overall if you kept it between "I" and "you." That would make it feel more intimate which I think you want with this kind of poem. But....just my opinion, dahling. xxoo

Mmmmmm well done....

Five.

sin and priest contrast highlights the verse, and one can understand the feeling. Hopefully most have felt the same intensity.