by ferociouskittycat
a comma here and there, but I love your subject matter, if I had written one, it would have been about this...ever hear of Dorcas Goode? a small child who was imprisoned with her mother, she was only 5..now that is inhumane, consider the prisons back then, I believe she lived with a pastors family after the trials and went insane at an early age...all of the witch trial transcripts are online... makes for interesting reading :
good work :)
This is one of the most touching poems I've read. You definitely hit the truth with this one. Excellent research. Fuck the commas the poem is excellent.
You have crafted an accomplished and poignant pantoum. Keep writing, Kitty!
Never again the Burning Times!
Blessed Be!
Lalenya :^)
I love the content, the rhythm, the full circle. Intense and beautiful.